Wednesday, August 12, 2009

lost

the water deep, cold
i’m in way over my head
flailing, sinking, lost

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Poetry by M.J.B. is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 United States License.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

this haiku captures the sinking, overwhelming feelings very well.

Anonymous said...

swim....