this water doesn't flow
as the rain continues falling
I'm caught in the undertow
I am in way over my head now
the pump works way too slow
no place for it to drain to
no place for it to go
over six feet deep and rising
this water doesn't flow
once more I slip down
extinguishing the afterglow
1 comment:
Intriguing metaphors. I am always a sucker for undertow imagery.
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